Scripting & Storytelling

Soon X, First Y

How to show valuable moments or reveals late in their videos

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Soon X, First Y

Who this is for: Creators who have highly valuable moments or reveals late in their videos, but struggle to keep the audience watching long enough to see them. What you need: A clear understanding of the most exciting or valuable moments in your script. How long this takes: 10 minutes during the scripting or editing phase to insert the necessary verbal or visual cues.

"Soon X, First Y" (also known as Foreshadowing) is a retention tactic developed by Paddy Galloway. It is used to string viewers along through the necessary, but perhaps less exciting, parts of a video. The creator explicitly promises a high-value payoff later in the video ("Soon X..."), but immediately creates a prerequisite that requires the viewer to watch the current segment to understand or earn that payoff ("...but first, we have to do Y").

Standard ScriptingSoon X, First Y Scripting
Explains the boring part, then shows the exciting partPromises the exciting part, then explains the boring part
Assumes the viewer will wait patientlyBribes the viewer to wait patiently
The viewer doesn't know what is comingThe viewer knows exactly what they are waiting for
High drop-off during slow segmentsHigh retention through slow segments

The core mechanic relies on anticipation and conditional reward. By explicitly stating what the reward is, you create a curiosity gap. By placing a condition on that reward, you justify the current, slower segment of the video. The viewer accepts the "boring" part because they know it is the toll they must pay to get to the "exciting" part.

Every video has a "messy middle." You cannot have explosions, massive reveals, or mind-blowing insights every single second. You need time to explain context, set up the rules of a challenge, or provide necessary background information. However, if the viewer gets bored during this setup phase, they will click away before they ever see the climax.

"Soon X, First Y" matters because it acts as a bridge over these slow segments. It artificially inflates the viewer's patience. When a viewer is told that a massive reveal is coming, their brain releases a small amount of dopamine in anticipation. That anticipation is usually strong enough to carry them through 2 to 3 minutes of necessary context.

"Identify a highly anticipated moment later in the video. Explicitly tell the audience it is coming. Then create a prerequisite that requires them to watch the current segment to understand the payoff."

This framework is critical because it allows creators to make complex, nuanced, or educational content without losing the audience to boredom. It buys you the time you need to tell the story properly.

The Podcast Interview: Paddy Galloway uses a specific example for interviewers. A host might say: "A little bit later I'm going to ask you about this crazy tweet you put out, but first we need to talk about how you built the company." The "crazy tweet" is the X (the highly anticipated drama). "Building the company" is the Y (the necessary context). The viewer will sit through the business history because they want to hear the drama.

The Tech Review: A tech reviewer is reviewing a new smartphone. The camera is the most exciting feature, but they need to explain the battery life first. Instead of just talking about the battery, they say: "I took this phone out at night, and the photos it took are unbelievable. I'll show you those in a minute, but to understand why they look so good, we first have to look at the new processor." The viewer watches the processor explanation (Y) to get to the photos (X).

Here is the difference between a standard transition and a "Soon X, First Y" transition.

ElementStandard TransitionSoon X, First Y Transition
The Setup"Now let's talk about the foundation.""Before I show you the final result..."
The ExecutionExplains the foundation."...we have to build the foundation."
The PromiseNone.Explicit promise of the final result.
Viewer ReactionMight get bored and leave.Stays to see the final result.

The "Soon X, First Y" transition turns a boring explanation into a necessary step on a journey.

The first discipline: identify the "X".

You must know what the most valuable or exciting parts of your video are before you can promise them to the audience.

Do this now:

  • Review your script or outline.
  • Highlight the 2 or 3 moments that are the most visually impressive, the most emotionally resonant, or the most educational.
  • These are your "X" moments. They are the currency you will use to buy the viewer's patience.
  • Ensure these moments are genuinely good; if you promise an amazing "X" and it turns out to be boring, the audience will feel cheated.

The second discipline: insert the promise.

You must explicitly state the promise right before the video enters a slower or more complex segment.

Do this now:

  • Find the sections of your script that are necessary for context but might be slightly boring (the "Y" moments).
  • Right before that section begins, write a sentence that teases the upcoming "X" moment.
  • Example: "In a few minutes, I am going to reveal the exact email template that got me the job."
  • You can also use a visual tease: flash a 1-second clip of the "X" moment on screen while you make the promise.

The third discipline: enforce the prerequisite.

You cannot just say "Wait for X." You must explain why the viewer has to watch "Y" first. This validates the current segment.

Do this now:

  • Immediately after making the promise, use a transition word like "But," "However," or "Before we do that."
  • Explain the logical connection between Y and X.
  • Example: "...but to understand why that template works, you first need to understand the psychology of the hiring manager."
  • The viewer must feel that skipping "Y" would ruin their understanding or enjoyment of "X".

Promising a payoff that is too weak. If you say, "Later in the video I'll show you my new socks, but first let's talk about taxes," the audience will leave. The "X" must be significantly more valuable or exciting than the "Y" is boring. If this has already happened: audit your "X" moments. If they are not strong enough to hold attention, you cannot use this framework. You must either improve the payoff or find a way to make the "Y" segment inherently more interesting.

Forgetting to actually deliver the "X". Creators will sometimes tease a massive reveal to keep the audience watching, and then get distracted and never actually show it, or edit it out of the final video. This destroys audience trust. If this has already happened: in the editing room, every time you hear yourself say "Later in the video I will show you...", pause the edit. Skip forward and verify that the payoff actually exists in the timeline. If it doesn't, you must cut the tease.

Overusing the technique. If you use "Soon X, First Y" every 30 seconds, the video becomes a frustrating series of unfulfilled promises. The audience will feel manipulated and exhausted. If this has already happened: limit yourself to a maximum of 2 or 3 major foreshadowing moments per 10-minute video. Use them only when you are about to enter a significantly dense or slow section of the content.

This framework should be used strategically during the scripting or editing phase whenever you identify a segment of the video that is necessary for context but risks boring the audience. It is a targeted tool, not a constant rhythm.

This framework is highly effective for almost any creator, but it is especially powerful in three specific contexts. Educational and Tutorial creators must use this to pull viewers through dense, technical explanations by promising the final, satisfying result. DIY and Build channels rely on this to maintain interest during the long, repetitive hours of construction by teasing the final reveal. Finally, Interview and Podcast channels use this to keep listeners engaged through the host's background questions by promising a controversial or highly anticipated answer later in the conversation.